
Key takeaways
- Your LinkedIn About (summary) section is your pitch in your own voice. It is where keywords for search and proof of value come together.
- Only the first two lines show before the “see more” cut, so open with a hook that makes the reader expand it.
- The winning structure is: hook, two or three quantified wins, the keywords for your target role, and a clear closing line about what you want.
- Copy and adapt the examples below, then sharpen your headline and follow the full profile optimization guide.
The About section is the most under-used part of most LinkedIn profiles. People either leave it blank or paste a dry, third-person job description into it. That is a wasted opportunity, because this is the one place you get to speak directly to a recruiter or a potential client and tell them, in your own voice, what you do and why it matters. Done well, it carries the keywords that get you found and the proof that gets you hired. This guide gives you a simple structure and several copy-and-adapt summary examples for different situations.
The structure of a strong summary
A summary that gets found and gets replies follows four moves. First, a hook: one or two lines that capture who you help and how, written to survive the “see more” cut. Second, proof: two or three quantified achievements that show you deliver. Third, keywords: the skills, tools, and role titles from the jobs you want, woven in naturally. Fourth, a close: a plain statement of what you are looking for and how to reach you. Write it all in the first person, because “I help teams ship faster” reads as a real person while “Jane is a results-driven professional” reads as a filler bio.
Open with a hook strong enough to earn the click on “see more”. Everything else depends on that first line.
LinkedIn summary examples
Experienced professional
I help B2B software companies turn website traffic into pipeline. Over the past eight years I have led demand-generation teams that grew inbound leads 3x and cut cost-per-lead by 40%. My work spans SEO, marketing automation (HubSpot, Marketo), and paid search, always tied to revenue rather than vanity metrics. I am now looking for a senior demand-generation role where I can build a scalable engine from the ground up. Reach me at [email].
Career changer
After six years teaching high-school science, I moved into UX design because the same skills, understanding people and explaining complex things simply, sit at the heart of great products. Since completing my UX certification I have redesigned two nonprofit apps, lifting task-completion rates by 25% in user testing. I bring research discipline, empathy, and a teacher’s patience to product teams. I am seeking a junior UX designer role. Let us connect.
Recent graduate
Computer science graduate who loves turning ideas into working software. During my degree I built a full-stack booking app in React and Node, interned on a data team writing Python pipelines, and led my capstone group to a top-three finish. I am strongest in Python, Java, and SQL and I learn fast. I am looking for an entry-level software engineer role on a team that values clean code and mentorship. Open to relocating.
How to write your own summary (5 steps)
Write a hook that survives the cut
Lead with who you help and how, in one or two lines. This is all most people see before clicking “see more”.
Do: “I help retailers cut stockouts with better forecasting.” · Not: “I am a results-driven professional.”
Prove it with two or three quantified wins
Numbers make your pitch believable. Pull your strongest results and state them plainly.
Do: “Grew inbound leads 3x and cut cost-per-lead 40%.”
Weave in the keywords for your target role
Name the tools, skills, and titles from the jobs you want. This is what makes you appear in recruiter searches.
Do: name real tools: “HubSpot, Marketo, SEO, paid search”
Close with what you want
End with the role you are seeking and how to reach you. Do not make a recruiter guess whether you are available.
Do: “I am seeking a senior analyst role. Reach me at [email].”
Write in the first person and read it aloud
First person sounds human. Reading it aloud catches jargon and filler. If a sentence sounds like a bio, rewrite it as something you would actually say.
Do: “I build data tools people actually use.”
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Frequently asked questions
Should my LinkedIn summary be in first or third person?
First person. It reads as authentic and lets you speak directly to the reader. Third person can feel like a corporate bio, which is less engaging for a recruiter scanning quickly.
How long should a LinkedIn About section be?
Three to five short paragraphs, well within the 2,600-character limit. Lead with a hook, prove it with results, include your keywords, and close with what you want. White space and short paragraphs keep it readable.
What should I write before the summary?
Your headline sets up the summary, so get it right first. See our LinkedIn headline examples and the complete profile optimization guide.